LOL How did I know the first thing you'd pick up on would be the lack of dialogue?! I promise to include some in the second chapter. And seriously, SHNLSHN, cos you know I hate writing it. I rather suck at it. And it's easy to write without it, cos my narrator is cool and refuses to remember dialogue :DD And dude, next time you need to tell me straight away if my ideas are sketchy!! I think I might have placed too much emphasis on Shige being a traveling salesman when I told you my idea? Or I don't know, what wasn't good?
Hints! I've been dropping them everywhere haven't I? And actually, I included Shige's fail cos you mentioned you liked that bit about his cologne xD So I decided why not make him fail just a bit, not too much and even when he does fail, he's smart about it and you can't tell if it's on purpose or not lol. Ryo <3, that's all I've got to say. Like I'd give him a bad character, psh.
I have an idea I think, slave driver! I will post just cos I'm desperate for a part of your heart! ♥
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Date: 2008-12-31 06:21 am (UTC)LOL How did I know the first thing you'd pick up on would be the lack of dialogue?! I promise to include some in the second chapter. And seriously, SHNLSHN, cos you know I hate writing it. I rather suck at it. And it's easy to write without it, cos my narrator is cool and refuses to remember dialogue :DD And dude, next time you need to tell me straight away if my ideas are sketchy!! I think I might have placed too much emphasis on Shige being a traveling salesman when I told you my idea? Or I don't know, what wasn't good?
Hints! I've been dropping them everywhere haven't I? And actually, I included Shige's fail cos you mentioned you liked that bit about his cologne xD So I decided why not make him fail just a bit, not too much and even when he does fail, he's smart about it and you can't tell if it's on purpose or not lol. Ryo <3, that's all I've got to say. Like I'd give him a bad character, psh.
I have an idea I think, slave driver! I will post just cos I'm desperate for a part of your heart! ♥