ext_24001 ([identity profile] ununoriginal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] jewelledhours 2009-01-29 11:44 am (UTC)

ooh, i can't believe it took me so long to get around to reading this. so so sorrie, forgive me, ne!

i love ur way with words - the way u contrast their personalities and describe their motivations. i really like how u go into the details - all the elaboration paints a more vivid picture of how ryo and shige are like in this story :)

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