WOAH I was totally loving this fic and then the ending is just so BOOM WOAH WHAT WOOSH. And I like it. :DD
I like the longing-ness of it, and how Shige's obsession for Ryo is so evidently... evident. 8D I love how everything was already coming together up until the very sudden ending. I really like those kinds of surprises, character death or not; they give the story so much oomph. You don't see those a lot anymore, so props to you for that! \o/
It'd be interesting to know how it had happened (but I'm guessing the death was equally sudden and shocking like how you'd written it, Shige still had that pretty pretty mark on his neck ;D) but ending it here was just perfect.
PS. You are so talented, I love your writing style ♥ /gay
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I like the longing-ness of it, and how Shige's obsession for Ryo is so evidently... evident. 8D I love how everything was already coming together up until the very sudden ending. I really like those kinds of surprises, character death or not; they give the story so much oomph. You don't see those a lot anymore, so props to you for that! \o/
It'd be interesting to know how it had happened (but I'm guessing the death was equally sudden and shocking like how you'd written it, Shige still had that pretty pretty mark on his neck ;D) but ending it here was just perfect.
PS. You are so talented, I love your writing style ♥ /gay