This is killing me, it's really killing me and I can't even get away. As always, prefectly in character, perfectly written. Donghae was so hopeful, so firmly believing in their love up till now, it made me trully sad the way they ended up here. But because I am even more hopeful than Donghae, I'm not giving up lol I especially liked the way you let the sad feeling sort of fade away towards the end. I was really sad and frustrated by the time they met up and broke up for good. And because I had read the last line by mistake already, before reading the whole thing, I expected me to, I don't know, cry my eyes out in the end. But you executed Donghae's point of view so well that, by the time we reached the end, I was feeling more bitter than anything, as if time had really passed.
I will write no more, I am forever an admirer of your writing, as I have stated countless times. Thank you for this! Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! =)
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As always, prefectly in character, perfectly written.
Donghae was so hopeful, so firmly believing in their love up till now, it made me trully sad the way they ended up here. But because I am even more hopeful than Donghae, I'm not giving up lol
I especially liked the way you let the sad feeling sort of fade away towards the end. I was really sad and frustrated by the time they met up and broke up for good. And because I had read the last line by mistake already, before reading the whole thing, I expected me to, I don't know, cry my eyes out in the end. But you executed Donghae's point of view so well that, by the time we reached the end, I was feeling more bitter than anything, as if time had really passed.
I will write no more, I am forever an admirer of your writing, as I have stated countless times. Thank you for this!
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! =)