I just love this story to the bits and first of all I want to say do not think that 80,000 words of this were ridiculous because every sentence, every word was beautiful. I mean your writing, it's just plain awesome. And this is so realistic that it breaks my heart into pieces. I love the pain this story gives me. :D and about this chap, I felt so sorry for Donghae. He needed to end their relationship. He had to accept ending it actually and I don't get it why they're both in love but also they need a break. But they ended it for real now and it just tears me down. But I believe they will find their way to each other soon. Although Donghae is seeing someone else they will eventually realize how important and how indispensable they are for each other. And I'm so sad this masterpiece of yours is going to be over soon. This is perfect really. I need more of your writing in my life so write more I hope I'll see it and comment immediately. :)
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Date: 2013-05-20 07:24 pm (UTC)I just love this story to the bits and first of all I want to say do not think that 80,000 words of this were ridiculous because every sentence, every word was beautiful. I mean your writing, it's just plain awesome. And this is so realistic that it breaks my heart into pieces. I love the pain this story gives me. :D and about this chap, I felt so sorry for Donghae. He needed to end their relationship. He had to accept ending it actually and I don't get it why they're both in love but also they need a break. But they ended it for real now and it just tears me down. But I believe they will find their way to each other soon. Although Donghae is seeing someone else they will eventually realize how important and how indispensable they are for each other. And I'm so sad this masterpiece of yours is going to be over soon. This is perfect really. I need more of your writing in my life so write more I hope I'll see it and comment immediately. :)