I love this story so much! I've put off homework to read it but I can't bring myself to regret it in the slightest. (I'll get it done anyway)
I can't pick what I love the most about this. I love how well it ties in with actual events (I'm learning things while reading this), how you've characterised everyone and how they change with time, the pace you're taking this at, the descriptions, the way you've handled homophobia, confusion, insecurities and other obstacles/factors, the emotions. So, probably everything.
I like how people's reactions have varied from instant acceptance to somewhat apprehensive acceptance to zero-acceptance yet still loving, to flat-out hate and negative judgement. Well, obviously I don't like that last one but I do like how realistic the variance is. I think Hyukjae's family's reaction in particular was very realistic, and I'm curious (hopeful) to see if it'll improve with time.
I like that Hyukjae and Donghae's relationship hasn't been easy and that even when not 'in a relationship' they still have one. I like that they have their mistakes and misunderstandings, but still find their way back to each other.
You've done a brilliant job with this so far!
I really enjoyed reading it. Really really really enjoyed it.
Good luck with the next chapter, and I'm really looking forward to it!
~Wishes of health and happiness, 雪のカラ (YukinoKara)
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(I'll get it done anyway)I can't pick what I love the most about this. I love how well it ties in with actual events (I'm learning things while reading this), how you've characterised everyone and how they change with time, the pace you're taking this at, the descriptions, the way you've handled homophobia, confusion, insecurities and other obstacles/factors, the emotions. So, probably everything.
I like how people's reactions have varied from instant acceptance to somewhat apprehensive acceptance to zero-acceptance yet still loving, to flat-out hate and negative judgement. Well, obviously I don't like that last one but I do like how realistic the variance is. I think Hyukjae's family's reaction in particular was very realistic, and I'm curious (hopeful) to see if it'll improve with time.
I like that Hyukjae and Donghae's relationship hasn't been easy and that even when not 'in a relationship' they still have one. I like that they have their mistakes and misunderstandings, but still find their way back to each other.
You've done a brilliant job with this so far!
I really enjoyed reading it. Really really really enjoyed it.
Good luck with the next chapter, and I'm really looking forward to it!
~Wishes of health and happiness,
雪のカラ (YukinoKara)