continues to be perfect/flawless/wonderful. i just feel like you've handled donghae's transition so gracefully -- he has finally begun to understand what eunhyuk needs isn't for him not to be around or for him not to love eunhyuk, it's more than that. like, when donghae says in this chapter that he's one of those lucky few people who actually manage to find their soulmate, that's just...that's it, that's right. they fit with each other. donghae pulls too hard and eunhyuk gives too much or too little and there are misunderstandings and fights but as you illustrated in this chapter, they're so formed by the other it's almost impossible to separate.
and the club scene YES you did that so well. donghae stood on the precipice -- he almost became a person that ignored the pain or fucked it away, at the risk of ruining whatever he had with eunhyuk, whether it be friendship or romance, whatever. he could have destroyed himself but he chose not to. ugh that was so painful and raw and real. excellent, excellent update. and, as always, i look forward to more.
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Date: 2013-03-07 05:53 am (UTC)and the club scene YES you did that so well. donghae stood on the precipice -- he almost became a person that ignored the pain or fucked it away, at the risk of ruining whatever he had with eunhyuk, whether it be friendship or romance, whatever. he could have destroyed himself but he chose not to. ugh that was so painful and raw and real. excellent, excellent update. and, as always, i look forward to more.