i <3 you and your updates and this was the perfect length to read thank you thank you THANK YOUUUUU OMFG i love the beautiful simplicity of their relationship despite all the complications that arise and the obstacles and how they broke apart and yet they could never be truly separated from each other. and i can spot the characteristics of each person and everything - like hankyung's whole inner breakdown and the apprehension in his voice and the tension but donghae can't spot it (unless in hindsight)
by the way, love that you put in a scene where donghae has the chance to sleep with an attractive man, something with no strings attached, only to pull away after realizing that he would only love hyukjae (even if it was just friendship right now) and ugklhalfdha the admission that it /was/ a love song later. I didn't feel like tearing my heart out at this update (i'm glad. i had that urge for some past chapters before).
remember how idealistic we were back then, thinking that we would be the first, the last, and the everything?
AND THAT SENTENCE wooooow could apply to so many couples
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Date: 2013-03-05 02:06 am (UTC)and i can spot the characteristics of each person and everything - like hankyung's whole inner breakdown and the apprehension in his voice and the tension but donghae can't spot it (unless in hindsight)
by the way, love that you put in a scene where donghae has the chance to sleep with an attractive man, something with no strings attached, only to pull away after realizing that he would only love hyukjae (even if it was just friendship right now) and ugklhalfdha the admission that it /was/ a love song later. I didn't feel like tearing my heart out at this update (i'm glad. i had that urge for some past chapters before).
remember how idealistic we were back then, thinking that we would be the first, the last, and the everything?
AND THAT SENTENCE
wooooow
could apply to so many couples