Annyeong :) I'm a brand new reader of your amazingly written fanfiction. Honestly, at the beginning I was a bit against EunHae, because as a Hyukjae fan, it's sad to see that some people know him or Donghae, only because of their fan service, when there's actually a lot more. But your story changed everything :) First of all, I like this real feeling. I mean, in this context, it's so right for them to be together. They're perfect. Two people in love, who struggle against life and against a society that can't accept them. Secondly, I appreciate that your Eunhyuk isn't an ass. Sorry for cursing, but really, most of the times, Eunhyuk is the bad boy and Donghae the puppy, and I just can't tolerate it. Characters are also perfect. They behave exactly as people put under a lot of pressure: they're not heroes. They are men, with problems and insecurities and they make mistake. A lot. Let me say that in the last two chapters I felt the need to kick Donghae xD. When Hyukjae screams: "Why – the fuck – are you – so goddamned CHILDISH", I was making him a standing ovation. Really. Donghae behaves as if his ideas and are the rightest ones and he doesn't even bother to think that maybe Hyukjae is just a different person. And it clealy doesn't have anything to do with being or not being gay. I mean, not everybody love to show off they bed adventures. And Hyukkie is simply a more introverted person. Ok, maybe I'm a bit biased, but Donghae really drove mu nuts in these last two chapters :) I agree with them breaking up at this point of the story. The just need to understand if they can be together or not. And they can't do it being together, of course... So, well, I hope to read the next part soon :)
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Date: 2013-02-13 11:17 am (UTC)I'm a brand new reader of your amazingly written fanfiction.
Honestly, at the beginning I was a bit against EunHae, because as a Hyukjae fan, it's sad to see that some people know him or Donghae, only because of their fan service, when there's actually a lot more.
But your story changed everything :) First of all, I like this real feeling. I mean, in this context, it's so right for them to be together. They're perfect. Two people in love, who struggle against life and against a society that can't accept them.
Secondly, I appreciate that your Eunhyuk isn't an ass. Sorry for cursing, but really, most of the times, Eunhyuk is the bad boy and Donghae the puppy, and I just can't tolerate it.
Characters are also perfect. They behave exactly as people put under a lot of pressure: they're not heroes. They are men, with problems and insecurities and they make mistake. A lot.
Let me say that in the last two chapters I felt the need to kick Donghae xD. When Hyukjae screams: "Why – the fuck – are you – so goddamned CHILDISH", I was making him a standing ovation. Really. Donghae behaves as if his ideas and are the rightest ones and he doesn't even bother to think that maybe Hyukjae is just a different person. And it clealy doesn't have anything to do with being or not being gay. I mean, not everybody love to show off they bed adventures. And Hyukkie is simply a more introverted person. Ok, maybe I'm a bit biased, but Donghae really drove mu nuts in these last two chapters :)
I agree with them breaking up at this point of the story. The just need to understand if they can be together or not. And they can't do it being together, of course...
So, well, I hope to read the next part soon :)
Francesca :)