PART SIX! Oh, yeah! Probably my favourite scene from the whole story is when they wake up and they need to face the world and life going on. This scene just has very good vibes, it’s so well rounded.. “Donghae reaches out to pour the cologne into the bathroom sink in a childish attempt to spoil the studied perfection of everything around him” I don’t know why but I really like this moment. It seems to be random, but I like details like this. It makes your writing so captivating. And there it is: big freaking happy ending! I LOVE IT!! I would be so so SO mad at you if you didn’t do it! This story just needed it! Any open or unspecified ending would leave me in so much pain!
It is perfect story, you know… I’m sorry I’m not the best commentator because I love everything and I know it’s not really helpful… But I have one question, about one detail. There is this scene where Hyukjae comes to see Donghae after their fight, the one when he observes him from afar. It says “The front door swings open and Donghae comes out with a boy Hyukjae doesn't recognise.” It was Henry, right? Why Hyukjae didn’t recognize him? I mean.. I thought that since Henry knew how regular costumer Hyukjae was, it was because they were seeing each other somehow, more or less often. I know it is only some weird detail, probably you didn’t even pay attention to it, but it was the only thing that made me wonder what’s going on…
This is a piece of comment, huh? I’m sorry, I still love this story so much.. As I said, I even made my daddy to read it! (Every person I could get knows what Twelve Cupcakes is now because I was talking so much about it at the time…) Anyway, thank you for your writing, because you bring me so much joy with every piece form you and even if I’m not the best type of reader (my freaking long and blabbing comments…or no comments at all) I want you to know that I admire it very very much. Bows and kisses and you know.. all the fun things for you for your work. Love <3
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And there it is: big freaking happy ending! I LOVE IT!! I would be so so SO mad at you if you didn’t do it! This story just needed it! Any open or unspecified ending would leave me in so much pain!
It is perfect story, you know… I’m sorry I’m not the best commentator because I love everything and I know it’s not really helpful… But I have one question, about one detail. There is this scene where Hyukjae comes to see Donghae after their fight, the one when he observes him from afar. It says “The front door swings open and Donghae comes out with a boy Hyukjae doesn't recognise.” It was Henry, right? Why Hyukjae didn’t recognize him? I mean.. I thought that since Henry knew how regular costumer Hyukjae was, it was because they were seeing each other somehow, more or less often. I know it is only some weird detail, probably you didn’t even pay attention to it, but it was the only thing that made me wonder what’s going on…
This is a piece of comment, huh? I’m sorry, I still love this story so much.. As I said, I even made my daddy to read it! (Every person I could get knows what Twelve Cupcakes is now because I was talking so much about it at the time…) Anyway, thank you for your writing, because you bring me so much joy with every piece form you and even if I’m not the best type of reader (my freaking long and blabbing comments…or no comments at all) I want you to know that I admire it very very much. Bows and kisses and you know.. all the fun things for you for your work.
Love <3