I just discovered you, and this is the first fic of yours that I've read...and I can already say I've fallen completely for your writing. It's so well done, it kind of makes me want to get back to writing myself. ;^;
As for the story itself, overall it was really...cute isn't the right word, and neither is sweet, but I'm not sure how to put it into words. They had a bumpy ride, but it all turned out okay in the end. The end was beautiful. ;___; And I don't think the ending paragraph could have been any more perfect than that.
And now I want cupcakes.