First of all, I'm going to comment on the smut part where they're talking about getting married (because I am that corrupted in terms of innocence). And it is absolutely one of the best sex scenes I've read about eunhae. ever. Because compared to all the animalistic and raw 'gotta get in you now" things I've read, this stands out with the casualness and comfortableness between the two, the dialogue (so adorable) and just the simplicity of it.
It's not just sex anymore, what you wrote is the act making love because ugh it's just so nice and sweet to be called otherwise.
And then thank you for being completely realistic with the reactions of the family members and hyuk's friends. Honestly, it's nice to read about yay i'm so cool with this but it's always the fics with this boldness and bluntness about how unaccepting and cruel people can be that I fall for. and I'm a sucker for tragic love stories lolho
But to comment on the fic as a whole, you blow me away by how intricately yet realistically you portray all the characters. I begin to have empathy for them and I can relate and I totally see these characters as real people. (on a side note, I read some of the chapters late at night and because your writing is so detailed and believable, I got confused in the morning and thought that your portrayals of eunhyuk and donghae are how they actually are in real life LOL).
Brilliant, brilliant and brilliant. Looking forward to updates :)
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Date: 2012-03-20 06:27 pm (UTC)And it is absolutely one of the best sex scenes I've read about eunhae. ever.
Because compared to all the animalistic and raw 'gotta get in you now" things I've read, this stands out with the casualness and comfortableness between the two, the dialogue (so adorable) and just the simplicity of it.
It's not just sex anymore, what you wrote is the act making love because ugh it's just so nice and sweet to be called otherwise.
And then thank you for being completely realistic with the reactions of the family members and hyuk's friends. Honestly, it's nice to read about yay i'm so cool with this but it's always the fics with this boldness and bluntness about how unaccepting and cruel people can be that I fall for.
and I'm a sucker for tragic love stories lolhoBut to comment on the fic as a whole, you blow me away by how intricately yet realistically you portray all the characters. I begin to have empathy for them and I can relate and I totally see these characters as real people. (on a side note, I read some of the chapters late at night and because your writing is so detailed and believable, I got confused in the morning and thought that your portrayals of eunhyuk and donghae are how they actually are in real life LOL).
Brilliant, brilliant and brilliant.
Looking forward to updates :)