I think what I love the most about the way you write them is the playfulness that can quickly warp into serious angst because that's so them ;o; This line had me cracking up, it's def something Donghae would say (that lameass T__T): But they are not meeting at The Scarlet Room. They are meeting at Tao. Aha! Ahahaha!

AHA AHAHAHA

I love how established they are, but also how Eunhyuk is surprised when Hae's all blubbery and OMG I CARE ABOUT YOU and it's like, for all your jokes and games you both really do love each other >3< aaaaaah EUNHAE :( <3