See. I have no idea what you meant when you said that the part I hadn't yet seen was downhill, or whatever you said it was. Where I'd stopped hadn't been the peak hokay? 8| Actually, the moment I found striking me as a particular whelming point was the scene where Hyuk said "I don't need a girl." I mean that entire scene, not just the one line lol. (Of course I would reference to a scene using Hyuk.) Just a parting scene to show how important kangteukchul have come to be in their eyes and how much the men's hearts have changed on this trip since its start.
About halfway through, I actually forgot who the OT3 were supposed to be and paused to think about it. And thought it was Kihyukhae. But then, I wondered why you would portray the OT3 through a fourth party's pov, and then remembered this was actually kangteukchul. In a way, there are either two OT3's or it's an OT6.
The great thing is that it also slipped my mind what you told me you'd intended for this, and I was very much carried into Jungsu's subtle revelations and the nuances between his relationships with Youngwoon and Heechul, along with kihyukhae. You brought out the tiny forgotten caring of three men and let us see how they discover what it means to love or remember what it feels like to love through three boys whose innocence hasn't yet all been tainted by what they've gone through. And then working together to protect those kids.
I still had this Fantasy Island feeling, where they've come to look for sanctuary or fulfill some sort of half-hearted idea of happiness and peace. Then, finding it wholly T___T
Ergghh, there's so much more to be said, but I've went on a long ramble... Ugh. Yes. Awesome job 8)bbbbbbbbbbbb
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Oh, and:
They pause for a moment to roar at the thought of Hyukjae as a really hot girl. Hurrrrrr. I think I imagined it better than they did |D
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Date: 2010-10-30 03:33 am (UTC)See. I have no idea what you meant when you said that the part I hadn't yet seen was downhill, or whatever you said it was. Where I'd stopped hadn't been the peak hokay? 8| Actually, the moment I found striking me as a particular whelming point was the scene where Hyuk said "I don't need a girl." I mean that entire scene, not just the one line lol. (Of course I would reference to a scene using Hyuk.) Just a parting scene to show how important kangteukchul have come to be in their eyes and how much the men's hearts have changed on this trip since its start.
About halfway through, I actually forgot who the OT3 were supposed to be and paused to think about it. And thought it was Kihyukhae. But then, I wondered why you would portray the OT3 through a fourth party's pov, and then remembered this was actually kangteukchul. In a way, there are either two OT3's or it's an OT6.
The great thing is that it also slipped my mind what you told me you'd intended for this, and I was very much carried into Jungsu's subtle revelations and the nuances between his relationships with Youngwoon and Heechul, along with kihyukhae. You brought out the tiny forgotten caring of three men and let us see how they discover what it means to love or remember what it feels like to love through three boys whose innocence hasn't yet all been tainted by what they've gone through. And then working together to protect those kids.
I still had this Fantasy Island feeling, where they've come to look for sanctuary or fulfill some sort of half-hearted idea of happiness and peace. Then, finding it wholly T___T
Ergghh, there's so much more to be said, but I've went on a long ramble... Ugh. Yes. Awesome job 8)bbbbbbbbbbbb
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Oh, and:
They pause for a moment to roar at the thought of Hyukjae as a really hot girl.
Hurrrrrr. I think I imagined it better than they did |D