Oh, Jungsu's erotic photobook really does bring back memories. I really like how you put in stuff from real life in here (EunHae trip to Mokpo, etc.); it makes this so much more realistic. Even though I don't like, I think it fit more with the story that Jungsu and their manager don't approve. And Hyukjae's uncertainty. I love Junsu for being supportive, though. Donghae is such a sweetheart, willing to wait even though he has his...needs. I wasn't expecting Hyukjae to top, so that was a surprise. I LOVE the emotion during the sex scene. And it was awkward which is really believable since it's their first time (right?). All that dancing give them some advantage though *pervert* The last line is just so filled with hope. I love the entire thing so much! By the way, do you write the entire thing first or do you write as you post?
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Date: 2010-10-12 01:37 am (UTC)