I think that what I like best about this story is how much effort you put into it to craft it and lay it out and unfold it slowly layer by layer, because a canon fic like this can't be rushed, it has to be kept detailed and realistic and that's what you've been doing perfectly. Like Jungsu's and Seunghwan's disapproval, Hyukjae's uncertainlty - that's all done so believably, it keeps me on the edge of my seat as I read. And the sex is awkward and fumbling and impatient, like how first-time sex should be - you're amazing. :D
He's stroking Hyukjae's abdomen under his shirt and he feels Hyukjae's fingers on the small of his back and maybe this force of emotion is something that people only experience once in their lives, or maybe some don't ever experience it at all; stronger than hatred or jealousy or lust, stronger and innumerable times more beautiful. - THIS IS GORGEOUS AND POWERFUL AND BEAUTIFUL. ♥
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I think that what I like best about this story is how much effort you put into it to craft it and lay it out and unfold it slowly layer by layer, because a canon fic like this can't be rushed, it has to be kept detailed and realistic and that's what you've been doing perfectly. Like Jungsu's and Seunghwan's disapproval, Hyukjae's uncertainlty - that's all done so believably, it keeps me on the edge of my seat as I read. And the sex is awkward and fumbling and impatient, like how first-time sex should be - you're amazing. :D
He's stroking Hyukjae's abdomen under his shirt and he feels Hyukjae's fingers on the small of his back and maybe this force of emotion is something that people only experience once in their lives, or maybe some don't ever experience it at all; stronger than hatred or jealousy or lust, stronger and innumerable times more beautiful. - THIS IS GORGEOUS AND POWERFUL AND BEAUTIFUL. ♥