sigh, i have always wanted to write eunhae, but never got a chance to, but i guess i don't have to now since you basically put everything i wanted to write into one really really really long fic .___.
i love the flow of this, it's really fluid and smooth--kind of like it all comes naturally, i guess? because all of this is natural for donghae and hyukjae, and once i started reading i just couldn't stop because it was just like a current that brought me along and i couldn't get out of it ;~; and i can't express my gratitude towards you making hyukjae so scared. i've always thought that if there's anything keeping these two apart, it would be hyukjae's fear of society and the whole religion thing, because donghae is too perfect for him to say no to. so many writers overlook that and pretend it doesn't exist or that it doesn't matter, but really, it does, and especially in a fic like this, where you write it with the real timeline, it really was necessary, and you did it so perfectly ;A; and i adore how you just took your time with it, you didn't rush it just like donghae didn't rush it, and you gave hyukjae time until he was ready because sometimes it just feels like the characters aren't ready and you have to squeeze in a few thousand more words until they are .____.
sorry it took me so long to jump on the bandwagon! hahaha it always seems to happen to me. /sigh i guess if there's one more thing for me to say (because i know i'm babbling D:), i think it's great how you started from their trainee days and not from when they debuted, because it really all started before that - when both of them were careless and didn't even know what love was, and were still trying to find out how they fit with each other.
yeah, uh, gonna stop babbling now. you must update soon. must must must. <3
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Date: 2011-03-04 08:24 pm (UTC)sigh, i have always wanted to write eunhae, but never got a chance to, but i guess i don't have to now since you basically put everything i wanted to write into one really really really long fic .___.
i love the flow of this, it's really fluid and smooth--kind of like it all comes naturally, i guess? because all of this is natural for donghae and hyukjae, and once i started reading i just couldn't stop because it was just like a current that brought me along and i couldn't get out of it ;~; and i can't express my gratitude towards you making hyukjae so scared. i've always thought that if there's anything keeping these two apart, it would be hyukjae's fear of society and the whole religion thing, because donghae is too perfect for him to say no to. so many writers overlook that and pretend it doesn't exist or that it doesn't matter, but really, it does, and especially in a fic like this, where you write it with the real timeline, it really was necessary, and you did it so perfectly ;A; and i adore how you just took your time with it, you didn't rush it just like donghae didn't rush it, and you gave hyukjae time until he was ready because sometimes it just feels like the characters aren't ready and you have to squeeze in a few thousand more words until they are .____.
sorry it took me so long to jump on the bandwagon! hahaha it always seems to happen to me. /sigh i guess if there's one more thing for me to say (because i know i'm babbling D:), i think it's great how you started from their trainee days and not from when they debuted, because it really all started before that - when both of them were careless and didn't even know what love was, and were still trying to find out how they fit with each other.
yeah, uh, gonna stop babbling now. you must update soon. must must must. <3