the way u document their internal conflict over their growing r/ship feels so spot-on - like how hyukjae can only rationalise it thru the filter of eunhyuk and how he's struggling against his religious tenets and values, while donghae, donghae would be the one who is, in this respect, going more on blind faith. i like the stage names analogy, hyuk with his 'masks', while donghae is donghae wherever he is.

(this might get long cuz i'm commenting as i read :p)

and this is obligatory but I ADORE ZHOUMI-YESUNG-SUNGMIN CAMEO :DD

and the scene where donghae visits hyukjae and they finally kiss is so exquisitely touching i would say it's perfect, but their r/ship isn't and their situation isn't, but it completely captures tat flawed perfection of no-return &hearts

plus the humorous bits like where donghae kills shindong's laptop for gay sex instructions are ADORABLE XD mwahhahaha, ass-focused, rofl~

...and tat was one of the most intense sex scenes i have ever read. u have totally outdone urself.

god, this story is SO EPIC. i have missed ur epic stories *happily pets this story*