http://kiriee.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kiriee.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] jewelledhours 2010-08-03 01:06 am (UTC)

Wonderful. From the beggining to the end.

It took me a time to start reading this, I'm with this tab open since you posted, but I really wanted to read, because I remember the last fic yours I read that was more than perfect. Now I'm really happy that I did it, since the start I was mesmerized, couldn't stop reading, even this part having more than 10.000 words, I felt sad when I finished.

Your writing let me speechless (again), the emotions and feelings are so real, really amazing how you described using Donghae's POV since they're just trainees and the development of their friendship, when love was something unknown, until Donghae realizing his feelings and trying to deal with it together with so many other things like the debut, the stress, the pressure -trying to get used to this- the death of his father. And with all this, having Hyukjae and the others by his side was essential to help him to endure, even that having Hyukjae always with him was painful at the same time. But waiting to see how the things will be with both. :)

And both sharing the same bed and wrapped around each other, I love so much these parts, because they don't feel uncomfortable doing this even being the same gender and only friends. <3 This friendship of them is so perfect, I kind of feel jealous. XD LOL

Anyway, I loved it so much, I'm memming this.♥

Can't wait for the next part! Thank you for sharing. :3

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