this hurts, your writing, oh god. i'm crying and i don't actually do this much for fanfiction, and the most important thing is this wasn't even a straight out angsty fic like people dying all over the place, or anything. all i can say is i love this so hard it hurts. it's so intricate, every single little nuance of their journey thus far and it's just donghae and hyukjae even though there's sungmin and junsu and everyone else, and all of donghae's reactions to hyukjae, it's just fucking precious and so real, i feel like i'm on a train winding through donghae's heart. and your writing style, god help me i love it so bad, how your narration transits so smoothly into speech and donghae's thoughts and his heart. i really really hope you continue with this because i - i don't even have words anymore how much i loved this, and eunhae aren't even my otp but you write them so beautifully i can't do anything else but read this over and over again. <3
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Date: 2010-07-30 12:35 am (UTC)i'm crying and i don't actually do this much for fanfiction, and the most important thing is this wasn't even a straight out angsty fic like people dying all over the place, or anything.
all i can say is i love this so hard it hurts. it's so intricate, every single little nuance of their journey thus far and it's just donghae and hyukjae even though there's sungmin and junsu and everyone else, and all of donghae's reactions to hyukjae, it's just fucking precious and so real, i feel like i'm on a train winding through donghae's heart.
and your writing style, god help me i love it so bad, how your narration transits so smoothly into speech and donghae's thoughts and his heart.
i really really hope you continue with this because i - i don't even have words anymore how much i loved this, and eunhae aren't even my otp but you write them so beautifully i can't do anything else but read this over and over again.
<3