I don't think my comment will ever be able to give you justice because this...this is perfect, not just grammar wise (which isn't really important but I noticed, y'know, that there isn't one single careless slip of grammar in this, but then again it might just be my OCD acting up again) but character wise as well. The cause behind every fact and the careful influxes of tv shows that we've watched before gives a really good sense of realism, and everything in here just had me captivated and eager to continue reading. It's nearing one am and my brain feels a little silent and empty right now, ths is how impactful and incoherency inducing this fic is. Every line in here delivers such meaning and leaves such an impression idek. ;~; This is perfect.
The previous part was fascinating too; how you described Hae's actions rather than wording it out such that it screams HAE IS OLD makes me happy because I love when the writer writes fic such that it makes me think and properly analyse her words before coming to a conclusion about something. Mmm. So beautiful. ♥
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Date: 2010-07-29 04:57 pm (UTC)I don't think my comment will ever be able to give you justice because this...this is perfect, not just grammar wise (which isn't really important but I noticed, y'know, that there isn't one single careless slip of grammar in this, but then again it might just be my OCD acting up again) but character wise as well. The cause behind every fact and the careful influxes of tv shows that we've watched before gives a really good sense of realism, and everything in here just had me captivated and eager to continue reading. It's nearing one am and my brain feels a little silent and empty right now, ths is how impactful and incoherency inducing this fic is. Every line in here delivers such meaning and leaves such an impression idek. ;~; This is perfect.
The previous part was fascinating too; how you described Hae's actions rather than wording it out such that it screams HAE IS OLD makes me happy because I love when the writer writes fic such that it makes me think and properly analyse her words before coming to a conclusion about something. Mmm. So beautiful. ♥
This is going in my memories. :DDD