no i am not secretly going through all of your fics
THIS. <3 i adore the fact that it's vague, it made it all the more lovely - it emphasizes the fact that they don't want to openly talk about the matter and the situation they're in. and the fact that this is in heechul's pov /dies because heechul isn't the exactly the main character here and it's so much more quaint to hear eunhyuk and sungmin's story from the outside, because we don't know anything about them but we can still feel every ounce of their love for each other. and it just makes the impact harder when we find out more about sungmin at the end, so painful but so realistic and it's like those winter nights when it's cold and dark out and you have to take the bus home alone and everything just passes you by in a blur but you have to keep going no matter what, you have to get home what am i even talking about /shot
the parallel between the leeteuk/heechul and sungmin/eunhyuk was so askhdaslhjd <3
Jongwoon gets caught the next day fucking Ryeowook into the wall. THIS LINE AKLSJFHLASD ;___; i love the crude language you used here because that would be exactly how they would talk in this fic, like it's normal but the matter of fact is that between yesung and ryeowook, it's more than just fucking, they're making love, but in the end it's all the same, with clients, with each other, so much the same but at the same time so different because i'm sure they don't fuck their clients or let their clients fuck them, it's just work, it doesn't even mean enough for it to be called fucking.
that was probably incoherent, so i apologize in advance .____. i already waited like a day before commenting, too, ugh
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Date: 2011-03-21 06:59 am (UTC)no i am not secretly going through all of your ficsTHIS. <3 i adore the fact that it's vague, it made it all the more lovely - it emphasizes the fact that they don't want to openly talk about the matter and the situation they're in. and the fact that this is in heechul's pov /dies because heechul isn't the exactly the main character here and it's so much more quaint to hear eunhyuk and sungmin's story from the outside, because we don't know anything about them but we can still feel every ounce of their love for each other. and it just makes the impact harder when we find out more about sungmin at the end, so painful but so realistic and it's like those winter nights when it's cold and dark out and you have to take the bus home alone and everything just passes you by in a blur but you have to keep going no matter what, you have to get home
what am i even talking about /shotthe parallel between the leeteuk/heechul and sungmin/eunhyuk was so askhdaslhjd <3
Jongwoon gets caught the next day fucking Ryeowook into the wall.
THIS LINE AKLSJFHLASD ;___; i love the crude language you used here because that would be exactly how they would talk in this fic, like it's normal but the matter of fact is that between yesung and ryeowook, it's more than just fucking, they're making love, but in the end it's all the same, with clients, with each other, so much the same but at the same time so different because i'm sure they don't fuck their clients or let their clients fuck them, it's just work, it doesn't even mean enough for it to be called fucking.
that was probably incoherent, so i apologize in advance .____. i already waited like a day before commenting, too, ugh