ext_24001 ([identity profile] ununoriginal.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] jewelledhours 2009-01-03 01:43 am (UTC)

omg when i came to the last bit, i thot 'IS THIS THE END' at 1st and then i realised it was only THIS PART. LOLZ.

i think this is my favourite chapter - u provide great insight into the second wind in ryo and shige's r/ship and it's beautiful yet very realistic the way koyama's feelings of 'aloneness' (tat whole description of it is SO TOTALLY TRUE, u r SPOT-ON, woman) gradually develop into affection and companionship for yamapi.

i am now late in going home to jb cuz of u :p

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