What a fantastic end to the first part! You really feel the cameraderie between the four of them. And it's so nice seeing Koyama moving on and trusting someone else, and Pi is so lovely and sweet. He really is trying to connect with Koyama and it's wonderful.
And Ryo and Shige! AHHH those two, so in love, though there's always calm before the storm, ne? Poor Shige is suffocated by Ryo, but at the same time, Ryo is so in love with Shige that he doesnt want to let go even for a second.
I also really loved how you show the development of each of their love stories over time. How Koyama was initially indifferent, how Pi tried to reach out to him, how Koyama learnt to be happy again and not regretful and bitter anymore about Ryo and Shige.
What a great New Year's present to everyone! Thanks Gem!
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What a fantastic end to the first part! You really feel the cameraderie between the four of them. And it's so nice seeing Koyama moving on and trusting someone else, and Pi is so lovely and sweet. He really is trying to connect with Koyama and it's wonderful.
And Ryo and Shige! AHHH those two, so in love, though there's always calm before the storm, ne? Poor Shige is suffocated by Ryo, but at the same time, Ryo is so in love with Shige that he doesnt want to let go even for a second.
I also really loved how you show the development of each of their love stories over time. How Koyama was initially indifferent, how Pi tried to reach out to him, how Koyama learnt to be happy again and not regretful and bitter anymore about Ryo and Shige.
What a great New Year's present to everyone! Thanks Gem!